A Good Teacher
CiCi
A good teacher is a person who carefully teaches people knowledge in school. They always have a professional education in one subject; this can include English, Mathematics, History and so on. Some of them usually go to school to take a teacher course, and they learn how to teach other people from this class. After that, they have to go to many different classes to listen to the people who are already teachers, because they can learn many different ways to teach the students. When they become a teacher, the first thing they should learn is to have more patience. Teachers must teach students very carefully, because they should make sure the students all understand. And sometimes teachers should repeat one thing several times. Finally, a good teacher also should often make the class very lively, because the students will pay more attention if the class is interesting. For example, some teachers always tell some stories to the students. According to this, the students will like the class and want to study hard in this class. In conclusion, a good teacher will make people feel interested when they learn a lot of things.
Your topic sentence is very strong. I like it and keep trying.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you.But I think the most important thing for a teacher is EXPERIENCE!--Victor ^^
ReplyDeleteYour topic sentence is very strong. I like it and keep trying.
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Jimmy said
ReplyDeleteyour first sentence is much your topic .You let me know what teacher is . GOOD TRY
I agree with you cici!I think Linda is a good teacher!
ReplyDeleteI think so too because Teachers affect students leaning very much. However, I also think that students should not depend on teacher too much. Haruka
ReplyDeleteWho is your favorite teacher? Is it Linda? hahahahaha .....
ReplyDeleteThe topic sentence should change like "A good teacher is a person who teaches people knowledge carefully in school."
ReplyDeletei think the first sentence carefully teaches need to change teaches carefully.
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In my opinion, I think they are both correct.
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