Kevin ( first time to middle school )[NEW]
First time to middle school
Kevin
When I first went to middle school, I was very excited. This school was a private school. It was very big and sumptuous. It has high students and middle students in this school. They used three built to separate students. There have middle students built, high students built, and met built in this school. In this school, sports are very popular. It has two big standard soccer fields, two basketball grounds, and one golf place. This school had three dormitories. One dormitory was used for all middle students, the other dormitories were used for high students—guys dormitory and girls dormitory.
I came to this school in winter. I wore a white outer clothing, Nike shoes, and blue jeans to school. I remember my hair was long to the eyes and ears. My class had thirty people. My first middle class teacher was a female, She looked very young. She taught us many things.
Kevin
When I first went to middle school, I was very excited. This school was a private school. It was very big and sumptuous. It has high students and middle students in this school. They used three built to separate students. There have middle students built, high students built, and met built in this school. In this school, sports are very popular. It has two big standard soccer fields, two basketball grounds, and one golf place. This school had three dormitories. One dormitory was used for all middle students, the other dormitories were used for high students—guys dormitory and girls dormitory.
I came to this school in winter. I wore a white outer clothing, Nike shoes, and blue jeans to school. I remember my hair was long to the eyes and ears. My class had thirty people. My first middle class teacher was a female, She looked very young. She taught us many things.
posted by LitWorld at
3:06 PM
3 Comments:
You have written many details,we can recognize the objects.But if you use the space and time order,that will be more clearly.
--Victor
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LitWorld, at 6:14 PM
Not bad story.Did you make some new friends in your middle school?
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LitWorld, at 10:28 PM
I think there aren't too many people who are excited in the scool at first time.You are the special one.Nice article.
My name is Lin.
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LitWorld, at 12:42 PM
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