my first day of school
Lin
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My first day of school
Long time ago, It was 1994 and I was seven years old when I went to the school in the first day.My mother drove me to the terrible elementary school. It was a very unfamiliar environment for me. First, I was very scared about the school and I looked around. I saw many strange children that I never met before, that’s why I was so quiet on that day. Then, my mother wanted to go back to her work, but I asked her to stay with me. Next, she told me everything would be fine and she would come here to pick me up as soon as possible. I trusted her. Then she left. My teacher came to stand in front of me and she brought me to the noisy classroom. By the way, my teacher is a very young lady who was so pretty and kind. I just stayed in my seat and only looked at the beautiful teacher. After a while, I fell asleep. When I woke up, the class ended. I saw my mother come to pick me up, I was so happy. The feeling felt like I won the big prize of the lottery. In the end of that day, my mother and I went home together with our smiles. Also, I could feel Mr. Sunny smiling at us. My first day had a wonderful ending and a sweet memory.
Final Draft
My first day of school
Long time ago, It was 1994 and I was seven years old when I went to the school in the first day.My mother drove me to the terrible elementary school. It was a very unfamiliar environment for me. First, I was very scared about the school and I looked around. I saw many strange children that I never met before, that’s why I was so quiet on that day. Then, my mother wanted to go back to her work, but I asked her to stay with me. Next, she told me everything would be fine and she would come here to pick me up as soon as possible. I trusted her. Then she left. My teacher came to stand in front of me and she brought me to the noisy classroom. By the way, my teacher is a very young lady who was so pretty and kind. I just stayed in my seat and only looked at the beautiful teacher. After a while, I fell asleep. When I woke up, the class ended. I saw my mother come to pick me up, I was so happy. The feeling felt like I won the big prize of the lottery. In the end of that day, my mother and I went home together with our smiles. Also, I could feel Mr. Sunny smiling at us. My first day had a wonderful ending and a sweet memory.
posted by LitWorld at
3:21 PM
2 Comments:
Kevin:You've included some interesting information and clear details in this article.We can recognize the objects.I like your story very much
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LitWorld, at 7:26 PM
Good story.You was so luck,your teacher was nice.I remembered my teacher was an old lady.
Cathy
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LitWorld, at 9:44 PM
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