Soldier
Soldier
By Jimmy To be a soldier maybe is every child’s dream. In the dream, they wear dark green clothing and bring guns to fight in the battle. They feel proud. That’s a simple soldier’s style. A soldier is to protect our country to let our have wonderful life. Actually, a soldier is a tough job. It needs a lot of courage. In their side, they think they can sacrifice for their love. And also they have so much pressure in their mind. Take example, they may know they will maybe die in the war, and they have to leave their parents or friends. Indeed, they know what they want. They know what they do. They always put their country on first. They think if they protect their country. The country will protect their parents. That’s why a soldier is really hard job for every people
By Jimmy To be a soldier maybe is every child’s dream. In the dream, they wear dark green clothing and bring guns to fight in the battle. They feel proud. That’s a simple soldier’s style. A soldier is to protect our country to let our have wonderful life. Actually, a soldier is a tough job. It needs a lot of courage. In their side, they think they can sacrifice for their love. And also they have so much pressure in their mind. Take example, they may know they will maybe die in the war, and they have to leave their parents or friends. Indeed, they know what they want. They know what they do. They always put their country on first. They think if they protect their country. The country will protect their parents. That’s why a soldier is really hard job for every people

4 Comments:
Very nice paragraph .
It is also very patriotic,and
strong.
You are right, to be a soldier,
you must have very strong personality!!!
Darina
By
LitWorld, at 5:19 PM
Very nice paragraph .
It is also very patriotic,and
strong.
You are right, to be a soldier,
you must have very strong personality!!!
Darina
By
LitWorld, at 5:20 PM
they wear dark green clothing and bring guns to fight in the battle. i think clothing need to change clothes
cathy
By
LitWorld, at 8:58 PM
"they will maybe die in the war"--I think it has a little problem,my opinion is changing to "they maybe will die in the war".
Ben
By
LitWorld, at 10:47 AM
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